The Outcasts: Guardian Angel
LauraAngelina for Elizabeth
Elizabeth is the guardian angel of William. At first, she comes off as mysterious, and a little weird but it's all a mirage for her true screw up nature. She used to be a janitor, however she was given this one chance- helping with Will- to prove herself among the Elites, the Guardian Angels. Once players get passed her mysteriousness she actually becomes quiet the goofy, and giddy character.
This first line, is said in seriousness... But should come across as comical, and laughable,
The second line is actually serious, kind of creepy.
Her third line is meant to be more comical. Shes yelling at will, all while having a mental breakdown where she's freaking out at Will for wanting to ditch her and go back to living his life before she entered it. Basically, this line guilt's Will into continuing their journey
"Because... I know everything! I AM god!"
"Well, since we're on the topic... Do you believe in the afterlife?"
"Because I'm a screw up, okay? You're my last hope! I mess everything up! Ya know that saying 'they've been perfect angels'? Well it's inaccurate! This is very freaking hard, and I just need you to cooperate okay? Please! I will NOT go back to mopping Bathrooms! I just wan't to be good at this one thing! I will NOT go back to mopping floors! Why do we even have floors to mop WE HAVE WINGS!"
I like how you did her voice. The last line was done really well, as for the rest it was really great too. As for the first line, I would tweak it a bit... First, you said I am a god, instead of I AM GOD. That's not a big deal, there can always be a few re-dos. But this line is more light heartedly intimidating at that moment. PM me, I'd love to hear you head that specific line again!