This is a pretty good audition your tone seems alright. Two notes is first off in your mic, its alright but it feels like you could sound clearer. I can't tell if its on the mic or just other situations still it's still rather good could perhaps be improved/worked around. The other thing is energy I brought this up with others but you feel almost a bit too calm Risa is meant be have a bit more energy. Also you did mess up the last lines a bit but that is an easy fix. Anyway it's ultimately good but you might want to consider some of these things and I highly recommend re auditioning.
Thanks so much! The issue with my mic is that my computer is kinda old and makes a noise constantly so i have to do noise removal a couple times, so that may be the issue.