your pretty quiet, try speaking a bit louder with some lines. and I dont know if that is your accent but im not really looking for it to be that. It could work but im not sure.
My accent is a mix between danish (sadly, im trying to destroy it XD ) and some other ones (british, american and posibly som russian), i will just try another accent :)
It's okay that you have an accent. You are just to quiet and reserved. You need to step back from the mic a little bit. Speak a bit louder maybe. Cause you sent just talking to yourself all the time. 8 inches to a foot from the mic c is usually good to capture your natural voice.
i will see what i can do :)