VALKYRIA CHRONICLES 4: Squad Stories (NEW EPISODE: "A Chivalrous Heart") - 1F
ooperlini for Eileen Blackwell
Female, mid/late teens. A social butterfly, Eileen's bright smile is a very welcome sight during the doldrums of war. Enlisting out of concern for her brother after he was seriously injured on a recon mission, Eileen's sense of responsibility is very admirable – even if Curtis does find it overbearing at times. Though once a painfully shy child like her “big bro”, Eileen has strengthened her resolve considerably in the face of danger; though not officially in a front-line combat role, she is an excellent marksman and a fearsome warrior for someone who looks so cute. Sensitive to the needs of others and always willing to help.
Voice type: medium/high. A proponent of the “tough love” approach to getting the most out of her squadmates – used often on Laurent and especially Curtis. Eileen can be demanding but she is never “bitchy” or an insufferable nag; all she wants is for everyone to be prepared so they can come home alive.
(with a slight edge; she is obviously concerned about her brother) Come on, show a little confidence. Those Imperials will jump on you the first chance they get.
(soft, almost ashamed) I was acting all tough, saying I'd protect you... but you ended up having to protect me again.
(embarrassed) Huh? W-wait— that doesn't count! I didn't mean to say it, I—! I-I just came by to say thanks! That's all, okay Curtis?
I Would love any feed back
This audition is a good foundation to start from. I noticed you stumbled on some words here and there; not sure if it's because you were nervous or not, but don't be afraid to just start the take over. For the most part, Eileen did sound like she was looking out for her brother in the first line... but I didn't feel she gave off enough of that immediate air of confidence that she is known to have. I LOVED how her embarrassment in the last line, you did well there - just deliver it a bit faster. Overall, tighten up your speed. Feel free to resubmit with these notes in mind if you'd like :)
okay thank you, I will consider it