Is this a troll audition? Seriously, kid. Get off.
I'll admit that i may not have perfected the accent and it was exaggerated a bit too much but i do my auditions as enthusiastically as possible so there is room to tone it down. I did that when i was on TV. In other words, no this isn't a troll audition but i can see why you might think that.
Sorry if that came off as rude, but this didn't sound remotely feminine. I wouldn't audition for a female role if you know you can't sound girly.. I suppose. All of your auditions shouldn't be enthusiastic. Different characters have different tones you need to portray.
Thanks for the advice. I auditioned because all of the characters i have been cast as (as of today) are female