VALKYRIA CHRONICLES 4: Squad Stories (NEW EPISODE: "A Chivalrous Heart") - 1F
Daniel_Mitchell for Scout
Enemy scout who discovers one of Episode 2's featured characters. Let's hear what you've got!
"Nice job predicting our attack route. But you're all alone. Didn't your CO teach you to use the buddy system?"
"Don't let them escape. After them!"
It's a good base, but this audition could definitely use more emotion - right now, it sounds like you're trying not to disturb anyone when you raise you voice. This may very well be the situation for you - if that's the case, it's unfortunate because it's much harder to be expressive (when you need to raise your voice). Also, try running the Noise Reduction feature in Audacity to filter out some of the background noise. Apart from these two things, a solid audition for a newcomer :)
Thanks! I appreciate your comment. I'll try to fine tune the noise reduction and I'll try to act like nobody is listening when I record new voice lines. Thanks! One question, am I allowed to put up another audition or do I have to stick with the one I've already got?
You can definitely submit another audition! I'll be casting the role tomorrow night when I get home from work (around 10pm EST) so you have another day to get another submission ready :)