Eladian Quest
aibrean for Jaimus Tinul (Jay-mm-es Tee-n-ull)
Major Character, Protagonist
Former member of Sorcerer Wielders. Jaimus is a powerful pumpkin witch who gets her magic from a sorcerers Artifact called Pumpkin of the Hollows. She disappeared for many years to get vengeance on the king for attacking the Eladian race. She believes her closest friend, Valera, was killed from the attack after being unable to find Valera. Jaimus is searching and hiding, searching for an opportunity to kill the king and hiding from a Dark Warlock who is out to kill her.
Jaimus has a rude attitude and rude humor. She doesn't smile and is a serious character. Her voice needs to be heard clearly and be sure to have.
Do not use a drama attitude but more of a "meh, what ever" attitude. Like she really doesn't care
(surprised or in shock (a shaky voice is optional but not too shaky))
"Valera? You're alive? But... I checked Edeynth (ed-ee-n-th) and I saw no one, the city was nothing but rubble... how... how are you here?
(more confidence in her voice)
"Why didn't you come to me? You knew where I was! I've been looking for you for many years and I began to give up on you! Why haven't you shown yourself?"
(angry)
[gritted teeth] "So you've found me, Dark Warlock...
[yelling] No, you're not my little brother! Not anymore! Not since you did those things to my family! [begins to attack with a battle shout] You're nothing but a low life killer!"
(concerned) "You need to leave, now.
Just shut up and go! Unless you want to end up as one of his victims!
Forget your home! He'll just burn it down with you in it as soon as he finishes performing rituals one you and I'm pretty sure you don't want that, so go! We'll meet up somewhere, anywhere!"
Hey, sorry to say but Sorcerer Wielders have been moved because it felt like this audition list has been ignored for too long, I'll be checking in on your auditions for Jaimus and Kina on this list though, but I've got a link to a fresher list with less typos https://www.castingcall.club/projects/eladian-quest-sorcerer-wielders-auditions
I liked the second part of the audition, the first part seemed to not really fit her so much. I did an update on her which gives a more clear and much better description on Jaimus over at https://www.castingcall.club/projects/eladian-quest-sorcerer-wielders-auditions , the lines haven't changed, but her personally is much more clear on that page and has an important detail, which is the only people she respects and does not have an attitude towards. Onto the lines. 1st line, Valera and Jaimus grew up together, when she finds Valera, she is surprised to see her, you did right on that part, the feeling she has is incredibly emotional to Jaimus, almost as if she actually was about to cry but still held back that emotion for the most part. line 2, it could use some work, I love the gritted teeth part, that was perfect, but after that, you need to yell it out with a lot of anger and at the part where she is pretty much charging at him, you need to let out a huge, angry, just let it all out with aggression. 3rd line, she needs to sound a bit more worried about the situation, like it's urgent, kinda a bit more like they're in a rush. I do love your voice for the second go around, that is a great voice for her, just pretty much mix the mood around a little bit as said before for each line. You're more than welcome to try again if you'd like.