I think this needs more passion. She's standing in front of a dozen different cameras, speaking to the whole population of the kingdom and basically trying to talk them out of rioting over the decision to give away 90% of their country. She needs them to feel like she is on their side (regardless of who and where they are), so she's empathetic, but also confident and competent.
Would you like me to redo my audition, then? I'd be more than willing to do so.
Sure, that would be great.