TRICKS OF THE TRADE - Prologue/Chapter One
BelleREllrich for Lerna Trick
Lerna Trick is definitely important, as she is one of the pair of main characters. (LERNA WILL HAVE QUITE A FEW LINES.) She is the beautiful and charismatic one of the duo; confident, strong and unpredictable. The last of which gets on Shae's nerves sometimes... because Shae is a planner and organizer. But, it pays off for them, most of the time. Lerna is very fluid in how she walks and talks, and has an inane sensuality to her that she doesn't try to emit, but is just there. She can be quite girly, at times, and loves a good fashion magazine every now and then. Most importantly, she loves Shae more than anything in the world, and would die for her sister without a moment's hesitation.
(she was woken up, and she definitely loves her sleep) Turn that stupid thing off, Shae! Some people actually like to sleep in!
Anyways, the harassment was worth at least that. Never mind the fact that we were investigating that one for five weeks. True—the publicity was good for her case, but when you catch a married ADA in a scandalous affair with a minor, the press that comes pouring in from everywhere is just too freaking overwhelming. But whatever. We did the job, we got paid, and that’s that.
(to Shae) So… do you want the bunk or the couch? Because you looked pretty comfy here when I walked in..... Good. I was hoping you would say that.
I love the clarity of your voice!!! Your voice is a smidge too high. But here is a thought... can you re-record these lines, maybe a little deeper? Lerna is kind of a confident, cool kind of bad-ass... But again, I love the tone of your voice, so I'd love if you tried again!