***Multiple people will be recruited***

I need people who have experience writing (suspenseful/dark) stories (and/or sex scenes) and are willing to assist me in rewriting/touching up this series. You'll be editing and/or leaving comments on the chapters as copies on Google Docs, so it helps to have experience using Docs.

I'd like someone who can give me detailed solutions for changes; more than just "This doesn't make sense" or something like that. Someone constructive who is willing to be creative and offer for review their own ideas on where to take a scene if necessary to salvage it.

For your application, please provide me a sample of a story or chapter you've written; it doesn't have to fit the suspense genre (it could also be erotica or just a general horror story, for example), but it'll be easier for me to see if you're what I'm looking for if it does.