The beginning had emotion and then the rest just became somewhat monotone. Honestly good all in all, personally I am looking for some emotion. Having a monotone main isnt fun. We'll see what my partner says. Thanks for the submission. - Astonish of Lilac Galaxy, Co-Boss
That's partially my fault for choosing a scene that doesn't have much emotion to it, haha. I can re-audition with a better scene, if you'd like ^^
A good tone, especially the first line, but yeah does sound a little bit monotones later on ^^ -Haru Katsumi VA of Lilac Galaxy
I'll try to re-audition, haha. It was kind of a monotone line in the show to begin with, so I suppose it was a bad choice. Regardless, still gonna try to re-audition. Thank you for the feedback!