Moviethon - RPGmaker Horror game
delnicebeto for Henry
James's friend who is one of the good guys up untill he gets killed off. He may return as a ghost later on or he may barely scrape through untill the end, not quite dicided. Not many charictoristics have been difined yet but a rather placid yet caring charictor.
James, I was wondering, do you feel different in any way? Are you sure 'whatever' happened in there hasn't had any long term effects on you?
(Heavily Wounded) *Light breathing* a- ames- ames on- james gone m.. mad... James do... this... uugh... *Light breathing*
*Optional Shreak*
The first line sounds genuinely concerned and the second line sounds good, but maybe a slight bit more believable with a few less ughs, but as an interpretation its great. I'm sorry I'm being critical but it's what feedback is supposed to be. Otherwise though, you did fine. Tone and Speed were great, and the idiolect was fine too. Good job and thanks for auditioning.