CreepyPasta/SpookySpaghetti Try-Outs
gamejunkiez for Jeff The Killer
Jeffrey "Jeff" Woods (also known as Jeff the Killer) is the titular main protagonist (later antagonist) of the Creepypasta of the same name who loses his sanity and begins killing to satisfy his homicidal urges. He has become one of the largest Creepypasta icons to date, even rivaling Slender Man. Jeff was a 13-year-old boy, that was a caring young man who loved his brother Liu. As a killer, all that changed and he became a vengeful and bloodthirsty psychopath.
An Extremely creepy Young man, Jeff is seen as a very threatening individual, his unusually high pain tolerance, and his Sociopathic behavior leads Jeff to be a man of apathy and violence at its purest. His voice could be seen as slow and threatening as he emphasizes each of his words to get a message across that essentially says: "I will kill you, one way or another." Either way, you look at it, experiment, Find your own inner murderous intent voice.
Hello...My name is Jeff, I am a....very...very...wicked man.....My favorite hobbies are gentle, enthusiastic walks in the park...FOLLOWED BY THE HOMICIDE OF ALL YOU HOLD DEAR!*Insert Maniacal laughter then calm down* My mother always told me that I needed to get a grip on myself....but every time I try.....I just.....slip.....*Insert slow, mocking laughter and focus attention as if you're looking at someone*
These doctors think they can contain me.....They think they can....handle me......NOBODY WILL STOP ME!!!! I WILL TEAR OUT THEIR HEARTS, I WILL GOUGE OUT THEIR EYES, I'LL MAKE THEM SO UGLY NOT EVEN THEIR MOTHER WILL BE ABLE TO IDENTIFY THEM!!!!!!! *insert Wild, crazed laughter for a few seconds before slowing down and stopping to think* You...Narrator...You can get me out of here...Can't you? *Say "can't you" with a clear intention that you have a plot* *Insert another creepy chuckle* These Cameras....they're gonna go off in a few seconds....and when they do.....
*Take a brief pause with each word exaggerating each one* YOU'LL! GO...TO...SLEEP!!!!! *Insert loud terrifying laughter that'll give people endless nightmares followed by screaming of surrounding doctors, crashing sounds and overall destruction and slaughtering*
"hehehehehe.......Jeff...is back....and tell your friends....i'm comin' for them too....."
Pretty solid, you got a lot of talent Game, but I'd like if you could remake this and take it a bit slower, in fact, try following this tempo when you speak: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F0V3Rn1xrb4 Overall very well done, you have the mood right but there are times when you're too aggressive and I believe if you take it down a few notches, give Jeff a more menacing tone you could start to build up from the beginning and have it reach a climax with each euphoric laugh. In the Second verse let your voice roar out in bloody murder then take it back when Jeff starts taunting the narrator. Gj and Ty for Auditioning