The Ballad of the Haunted
Alexdoesstuff for Fall
Fall has a large part in the first episode, but disappears after that. He's generally stuck with his nose in a book. Should be comfortable screaming and cursing. Don't be afraid of blank space in lines.
I think…. OOH a STUDY!! Look at all these books!!!!..............I’m gonna take em.
Who said I wasn't going inside?
Dang, this place looks old. Oh, hey, look, a spider.
Annunciating a bit more would be a good idea, and still showing excitement on the lines like “OOH a STUDY!” Would be a good idea. Other than that, I really like your voice! It’s just finding a good middle ground between the two takes you’ve done that would make it perfect :)
I'm having a little trouble finding that sweet spot between the two. I've made a draft but I'll try see if I can improve upon before the deadline