Thanks for auditioning! I really enjoyed your line one - I could practically hear the eyeroll. ;) That said, I have plenty of notes. First of all, you need a better mic - or to at least run noise removal after recording. That's a little hard to get past, and I'm afraid that (aside from noise removal, which isn't foolproof and sometimes leaves artifacts) there are no easy fixes. Secondly, careful with the lines you're reading - his name is "Tadashi" with a 'd' - not "Takashi" with a 'k'. Third, you're clearly just reading lines. I'm not getting any emotions here, you know? I mean, you literally say 'ha ha'. That's supposed to be a laugh - you gotta be happy, excited, exuberant! And lastly, in an audition like this I highly recommend watching the source videos. If you watch it before you record, it gives you a good baseline for what the director is probably looking for - like in the third line, it'll give you an idea of the energy I'm going for. That said, sometimes I don't like listening to the source material b/c it affects my audition. The compromise is record once, then listen, then record again tweaking your performance to find the best of both worlds. I hope this helps!