Myths of Unova - A Pokemon Comic-dub
Luke C for Hawes
The dean of Nacrene University and husband of Lenora, Nacrene City's gym leader. Kind and good-natured. He appears multiple times throughout the series, and uses his knowledge of Unovan mythology to assist the protagonist on her journey.
Preferred Voice Type - American/English Accent (unlike the other characters, Hawes can have a non-American accent)
Range - Medium - Medium-High
(Introducing himself | Friendly & welcoming tone)
I'm Hawes, the dean of Nacrene University. Your father and I are collegues. We worked on some of the exhibits here together... I know your probably here for the badge, but feel free to ask me anything!
(Asked Why a Skeleton is Missing it's Head | "Those silly kids and they're pranks" tone)
Oh that? Haha...well... it's a traditional prank pulled by the university's Paleo-Society. They'll be returning it soon enough.
(Injured, but trying to ignore the pain | Sense of Urgency)
Urgh... I'l be ok, dear. But we need to move fast, a group called "Plasma" took off with a dark orb.
Your delivery for line 3 has been my favorite so far. The perfect amount of urgency and worry without sounding forced. My only critique would be that I would of wanted Line 1 to sound a little more cheerful and confident. Hawes is the dean of a university and head of Nacrene's museum, and I want him to show pride in his work (though not cocky). Great job otherwise, and thanks for auditioning Luke!
Thank you! I think I may have interpreted that first friendly line as being more reserved than confident, though it makes more sense to use the latter now that I'm seeing it that way. Aside from that, I'm glad you liked it! I appreciate the feedback, and I'll definitely keep an eye on this going forward.
Thanks for your time!