Your delivery for line 3 has been my favorite so far. The perfect amount of urgency and worry without sounding forced. My only critique would be that I would of wanted Line 1 to sound a little more cheerful and confident. Hawes is the dean of a university and head of Nacrene's museum, and I want him to show pride in his work (though not cocky). Great job otherwise, and thanks for auditioning Luke!
Thank you! I think I may have interpreted that first friendly line as being more reserved than confident, though it makes more sense to use the latter now that I'm seeing it that way. Aside from that, I'm glad you liked it! I appreciate the feedback, and I'll definitely keep an eye on this going forward.
Thanks for your time!