I'm honored that your first audition was for my project! It was great for your first time! Now on to feedback: sadly your voice is too mature sounding for this role. Conversely, I did enjoy your take on line 3 for that exact reason. Also, there was some peaking in your audio, especially around Line 2. I would recommend recording with your mouth a few inches further from the mic, that will help in the future. Thanks for your time!
Thank you for your reply and feedback! Honestly, I'm just happy to get practice in any case. Voice range of 7-12 is a bit of an oddball for me and I was just trying things out, The peaking audio situation could also be that I was kinda straining my voice to even attempt a high pitch (which I never actually got to), and ended up pretty much yelling to try and achieve it. Anywho, thanks for your time!