Moviethon - RPGmaker Horror game
foureyesgirl for Clara
Married to Alex, Perent of Henry, a normaly quite logical woman who tries desepratly to make sense of the events coming on here, and ends up, in most situations, being the voice of reason. She's quite good at calming her normaly happy husbans temper by calmly adressing him.
Alex, I get that your angry, but shouting at Rodger won't help anything. The only thing to do now, is to find James.
My... My god... What happened... Henry?! (Sad yet Suprised)
*Optional Suprised Shreak*
Sorry that parts of the audition were repeated... I would still like some feedback if you have the time! :D
Good job, don't worry about the repeat, its fine. I do like the stright voice but someways you formulated things make her sound a bit like a robot, mabye a tiny bit more fluency is a good idea but other than that, the tone and dilivery of both the lines were great, and the surprised shriek was good too. Good job and thanks for auditioning!
Would you like me to resubmit another audition for Clara with your comments? :) Thank you for your feedback, it's what makes me improve!
I personally don't like to ask for feedback as I feel I don't have the right to ask. If you want to do another audition feel free, but feel equally as free to not if you don't want too. I'll happily agree with whatever you decide. Hope this helps.