I would of liked to see a little more energy and believability from your audition. For Line 1, I want to feel threatened by your voice. Right now I'm only slightly bothered. Really try to be immersed in the role and ENJOY watching the protagonists squirm. For line 2, convince me that what Grunt Jonathon found is important. Make me drop everything and listen to you. That's the delivery I want. You have a great voice and good mic quality (if it sucks now I can't wait to hear what it sounds like when its fixed) so I would love to hear another audition from you if you have some time. Thanks Kenn!