Be careful with peaking in Line 3. Other than that great job! I especially liked your delivery for Line 2. Its exactly what I'm looking for👌
Thanks for the critique. Should I attempt to redo the line(s)?
You are welcome to, but there isn't much to improve. I know that with a little direction peaking won't be a problem if I cast you. If you do want to redo your audition, just line 3 would be great! Thanks for your time Aiva!
Voice Actor
The dean of Nacrene University and husband of Lenora, Nacrene City's gym leader. Kind and good-natured. He appears multiple times throughout the series, and uses his knowledge of Unovan mythology to assist the protagonist on her journey.
Preferred Voice Type - American/English Accent (unlike the other characters, Hawes can have a non-American accent)
Range - Medium - Medium-High
(Introducing himself | Friendly & welcoming tone)
I'm Hawes, the dean of Nacrene University. Your father and I are collegues. We worked on some of the exhibits here together... I know your probably here for the badge, but feel free to ask me anything!
(Asked Why a Skeleton is Missing it's Head | "Those silly kids and they're pranks" tone)
Oh that? Haha...well... it's a traditional prank pulled by the university's Paleo-Society. They'll be returning it soon enough.
(Injured, but trying to ignore the pain | Sense of Urgency)
Urgh... I'l be ok, dear. But we need to move fast, a group called "Plasma" took off with a dark orb.
