Moviethon - RPGmaker Horror game
NuzikVA for Henry
James's friend who is one of the good guys up untill he gets killed off. He may return as a ghost later on or he may barely scrape through untill the end, not quite dicided. Not many charictoristics have been difined yet but a rather placid yet caring charictor.
James, I was wondering, do you feel different in any way? Are you sure 'whatever' happened in there hasn't had any long term effects on you?
(Heavily Wounded) *Light breathing* a- ames- ames on- james gone m.. mad... James do... this... uugh... *Light breathing*
*Optional Shreak*
Good job! I liked your 'this scream thing' as you put it, and I also liked line two with the injured, you clearly interpreted the scene the same way I had written it which means you understand the genre or theme I'm going for. Even if it doesn't, don't say anything because I currently think that you do and there's no reason to put yourself down in my opinion for something you don't actually have, which I think you do. Also, line one was delivered well as well, despite being a normal line I like the voice you used. Good job and thanks for auditioning!
Thank you for your feedback! I'm glad I was able to convey the scenes how you interpreted them :)