Hey there! Thanks for auditioning! Sounds like you're going for a comical approach, which I think would be interesting for something around the S.C.A.R. Instructors, but maybe not the advocates. Then again, it's actually not a bad idea to have some humor from the opposition, so this might work. That laugh at the end makes me think about Monokuma from DanganRonpa. I'll have to think about this a bit more.