Big Hero 6 Fandub Shorts
meowthrocket for Fred
The joker of the group, Fred knows he's in a superhero scenario and freaking loves it.
I'm just casting him for the "Fred's House" scene.
<realization dawning>Oh! Welcome to 'mi casa!' <teaching>That's French for front door.
<excited!> YES! <accusational> It's a bird!
<dramatic reveal>Don't you guys get it? The man in the mask who attacked us is none other than... voila! Alistair Krei!
Haha, seriously, energy is definitely your strong suit. That said, you do need to work on varying it a bit. For example, the third line is meant to be low and ominous, slowly building to the ridiculous reveal. Also, it's "Krei" like "cray". ;)
I just realized what I was trying to say! With your emoting you do a great job bringing it high, but you also need to bring it low as well. Like in that third line, it's full of energy, but it's quiet and low, know what I mean? The emotions there are nuanced, and that could be brought out more in your performance.