The Mythos: A Shooting Star!
megalodon302 for The Guard
A mysterious man who oozes dominance but with an equally short temper. The strongest authority, but with a childish temperament, the Guard exercises extreme prejudice when commanding and culling. He is not just a force to be feared, but admired as he narrowly avoids the path of cruelty.
(The Guard is being threatened, and is told he has until the count of four to state his business): Oh, I see; four seconds to justify my life. How many do you need?
(A pleading Jakob asks why he doesn't worry about being in danger, from spies and terrorists alike): Jesus; that's because I'm going to kill everyone here before that happens. It's simple.
(Urging Jakob closer, he tries to sound soothing): Come closer. Needn't be afraid; we're not savages.
Amazing! Almost exactly like I envisioned. It's always almost - and that's alright, I don't even know what I want half the time, but you've taken my feedback on board and really captured the character. Thanks so much :)