Final Smash! (Smash Bros) A Fandub Series of Yayster's comics
Jorpen for Falco
Range: Medium, medium-low
Series: Starfox
Personality: Brash, demeaning, collected.
Voice reference:
(Starfox 64) https://youtu.be/1NuFUW7imk8?t=39s
(Smash Bros 4, Starfox Zero) https://youtu.be/1NuFUW7imk8?t=2m30s
Falco Lombardi is a member of an avian race and ace pilot of the Star Fox team. He is also a good friend and friendly rival to Fox McCloud. He usually retains his brash, cool, and collected behavior. Although he's an ace pilot, Falco is sometimes caught in situations in which he cannot escape, and must rely on Fox for assistance, often to his chagrin.
In these comics, He is depicted with his classic brash nature and collected attitude. He isn’t phased easily, like when Fox points out he is being a hypocrite after Falco criticized something, nor when he walks out into a common room without his pants on. He also seems to demean others often.
I would like Falco to sound like his Starfox 64 voice or his most recent voice from Starfox 64 3D, Zero and Super Smash Bros. For Wii U and 3DS
(Demeaning, dismissive)
Big deal. Anyone can do that.
(Questioning, a bit blaming)
I still don’t know why you invited him.
(Judging, demeaning)
Yeah, well he’s the worst poker player I’ve ever seen.
I saw you wanted to know what I thought of your audition! The biggest thing I see is that the voice is too high. It's likely a better fit for Fox, but that role is already cast. The acting is good, and I like some of the ways you said certain words ("yeah" into "yeahhh", or how you laughed a little bit in that line, for example). If you want to reaudition, I would suggest going a lot lower in range, and slowing down a bit for the first two lines, make sure you don't slur words like "still dont" in the second line.
Thanks so much for the incredible feedback! Its definitely helping me a ton. I'm gonna try and give it another shot and see if I can get something lower. Thank you again!