I think you have the voice down, but if you'd be willing to do a retake, the only thing I'd recommend is making him sound more bold and confident. in the first line, he isn't worried at all once he sees that HE made it there, because he knows he can handle the situation. he of all people would probably laugh at his own timing. He's confident in his abilities for the second line, and in the heat of battle he's preparing an attack, announcing his name with honor and pride. last one should take these last two into account. he's just finished fighting the assassin and is tending to the injured. I want to reiterate that I like the voice, it's young but mature at the same time. looking forward to a retake if you do one!