VA-11 Hall-A: Cyberpunk Bartender Fandub
Jorpen for Virgilio Armandio
Virgilio Armandio is a regular at VA-11 Hall-A. He acts under a facade of being a pompous idiot, preferring to order drinks in riddles and using roundabout speech patterns. In reality, he is brave and selfless, and was once a just White Knight who fought against corruption and tyranny among his fellow Knights.
Preferred voice: Medium/Medium-high | Personality: Mysterious, snarky, cryptic | Voice reference: Todd Haberkorn
(grandiose, snobbish) "Such a... small yet comfortable place. Truly, an oasis of spiritual drinks in the midst of the suburban desert. A place where lost and corrupt souls can gather to forget their trouble for a while. A nest where everyone from the most pathetic scum to the vilest trash-junkie can just sit to kill their insides. Truly, a real Persona Non Grata. That's Latin for mysterious place, by the way. I'm so smart and philosophical."
(told like a riddle) "I'd like a single plum, floating in perfume, served in a man's hat."
(giving advice) "You shouldn't kick yourself so much. If you keep it up, any chance of finally forgiving yourself will someday be gone. Self-hate will leave you with a hole that will never heal. So please take measures against it instead of sulking so much."
Your pitch and tone are fine, but I think you could go a lot slower at some points and a bit faster at others. Overall, you did a fine job. The mic quality sounded good, and I didn't feel like you were just reading off of a script. Thanks for your audition!