Lustrias- an episodic fantasy audio drama and visual novel!
teezyamvona for George F. Vanhurst
George F. Vanhurst:
(warning) "I don't know who you are, and frankly I don't care. Get off of our sacred land or you will suffer the consequences! *growls*"
(angry, worried) "These....people! are not your friends Gabriella. They are strangers from another land, and we do not know of their intentions for you. Do not sacrifice your life for them, stay here where you are needed and are protected."
*improvise a line for him*
Hmmmmmm, though you do have some good moments here and there. The German feels forced and a bit out of place. We understand that you're trying your best, but being half German myself, I can tell that it's not authentic. However, no one else has auditioned for him, so you are obviously in the lead. If you are chosen then I can help you with your pronunciations. Ya?
Thanks for the feedback. Yes, I'm a bit rusty on my accents. Any help would be appreciated.
You're welcome, thanks for trying out. :D