Lustrias- an episodic fantasy audio drama and visual novel!
Awesomehylian for Mona
Mona:
(Being cute and innocent) "Welcome weary traveler, may I help thee find the way? (Giggles cutely) I am, and you appear to be a man. (Being a bit bashful) Oh my, well thank you Nicholas. I would love to be of help to you and your companions. Please ask me anything you'd like." [This is your time to really sell to the audience that you are truly thee most innocent, lovable, perfect thing they have ever heard. Make even the darkest heart shed a tear when they hear your voice.]
(pouting cutely) But I want to go with you. Please don't leave me behind, I can help you. (Thinking fast) Well you can, you can carry me on your back. I am very small and lightweight. You'll never know I was there. I can also help you see any bad guys when they try to get you from behind. (begging sweetly) Pwease Nicholas! Pwetty pwease with ice cream on top?
(giggling cutely and yet erotically) My my honey, you seem to be oozing some clear liquid from your lollipop. Should I...lick it? (giggles) I'm really hungry, and you wouldn't want me to starve, now would you? (giggles erotically then moans) Mmmm! That's the stuff Mona wanted. {Please sing for us a line or two from your favorite anime song}
Thank you for auditioning for us Awesomehylian. Is that supposed to be, Awesome Hellian? Heh, heh, heh, anyways. :P You have a sweet voice, and there are times that really capture our attention. However, we feel as if the emotion behind your words is one of trying to be cute as opposed to feeling the moment. Basically, it came off as bit, fake. But not so much that's it jarring. If you could do those lines a bit more convincingly, and yet keep that innocence, then you might have something here. We too get royally addicted to anime, and binge till our eye balls practically explode. So don't feel alienated or weird. You're right at home with us. ;)
It's actually a Zelda reference! :D I will send another take tonight or tomorrow. I do hear the melodrama. >///< Would you mind letting me know which parts you liked the best so I can make sure not to lose those in the redo? I would really appreciate it!
Most of the speech felt a bit fake. But especially the first line.