So far, this is how I imagine what Alanna should sound like. Great audition! Also, I think you should audition for Aelita as well because you kind of have her voice. PM me if you have any questions other than that, I'll let you know if you get the part by the deadline.
Okay!
i like how this sounds. I also like how you add the crying effect to your words. You sound truly heartbroken.