Misadventures of Miss Silver (Visual Novel)
Jeromy for Orewell Cooper
Cooper is another detective who is working for the Bureau.
He has a protective and cautious personality, often leading to him worry about the people he cares about.
Though I certainly AM a man of action and my ideal adventure contains of NOT reaching to the bed in the room I booked, HOWEVER, today can end without any supernatural encounter as well and I'd be content with it.
Miss Silver, you shouldn't get out of the bed unless you recover fully!
You didn't have enough proof to assume that.
Any Feedback would be greatly appreciated =)
It's really nice! In regards to the last line. I really like the second take, over the first one. We don't know the context of the line, but it felt more believable. Good job :)
Thank you for the feedback! You're awesome; have a nice day ;)
Besides, this is absolutely incredibly amazing?
awww, thank you. =)
WOOOOOOOOT! I love this!
Haha Thank you! Have an awesome day
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