Pretty good! I liked the delivery in line 1 A, and line 2 A, but maybe you could make your voice just a touch deeper for me to compare to if you are fine with doing a retake? For line 3 B you were close but it's not exactly there, I'd like to make sure the emotion I'm looking for is in that line, kind of a somber reflective tone with some angst. There's a character I thought of that might be a good reference for that line, you can send me a DM and we can discuss if you'd like to give it another try. Thanks!
Ah, fantastic; just sent you a DM, thanks! :)