Blackend Ash & Blood Red Eyes [Animated Short]
KyTheLemon for Peers/Bullies
Bullies and peers who constantly make fun of protag after and during school. Once brother passes the bullying get's even harsher and they start to make rumors that she had killed her brother.
Look at her, how poor and pitiful she looks. What? Are you waiting for dear 'ld Jasper to come and save you? Well he's dead! You must have killed him. I can see it in those crazy eyes of hers.
*laughing mockingly at the end they probably spit in her face. Can improve if you want.* Go run off to the sewers! A no good rat like you belongs there!
I tried my best with the spitting, sorry if it doesn't sound realistic or anything. ;; also, tell me if I need to tone it down with the laughing, I always get carried away with evil laughing and such.
You sound amazing! It sounds all good to me.