Tales From The Gameverse! (A very small youtube project)
OniKunIsGr8 for Various Fodder(3)
One of the more unique roles on the production, and one that will most likely require the most acting, in the traditional sense.
-[Pursued by an unknown creature with a friend in tow, you two duck behind a a building] ::Breathing heavily from exhaustion and fright:: "Jesus! What the hell was that...that THING?! I've never seen anything lik- [cutting their speech as the beast approaches] "I-it's coming back! Johnny, watch ou- Johnny??! JOHNNY!! ::your best scream of terror here::
There's a little thing at the beginning, sorry. That was me placing a pen down. Completely avoidable, and I apologise for not noticing sooner. That aside, I compiled two takes here as I believed both had their positive and negative aspects. I would greatly appreciate any and all feedback. I also apologise for the clipping. I tried DBing it in Adobe Audition, but that sounded worse so I just stuck with the raw takes.
No need to apologize! Thanks for your interest in my project, and it's a pleasure to make your acquaintance. I appreciate the double takes, as well. I don't think the clipping was anything too wild that can't be worked with. As for feedback, I'd like to preface this by saying I am not a voice actor/voice coach, and am a novice director at best, so take what I say with the tiniest grains of salt. (more in the next post)
I think you captured 2 different feels here. You were stumbling/slurring over your words in the first audition, which added this sense of almost maniacal fear where you can't even speak straight, and the second one was a bit more contained and discernible. Both the last bits were good too, I could definitely feel tension there! I think you've definitely got potential here, and I'd be interested in working with ya. Let me know whatcha think, or dm me if you have any questions about the project!