Hi Glacier Rants! Thanks so much for your audition! You did misread small portions of almost every line! Be sure to carefully read and practice lines before you submit your final takes! I did also notice you struggled a little bit to read through the lines, I apologize for any confusion or unnatural feeling lines. Lastly, your mic was a tad on the "peaky" side, should you be cast I'd recommend moving a smidge away from the mic so it's easier to understand induvial words and syllables! None the less, I really enjoyed your delivery on lines B2 and C2. Your delivery and tone were nicely done in line B2, when you said "Ohhh okay" was great as well as the transition from casual to low was perfectly executed! Your delivery and voice were also well done in C2! I especially enjoyed when you said "Wha-wha-What!?", but it seems like your tone slipped back into more "Neutral", should you be casted be sure to keep showing emotion through your lines! Your AMAZING when you do! You've been shortlisted for the role! Thanks so much for your interest in my project! Be sure to join our community discord for updates on the project, extended character info, and meet others who are interested in the project!