FANTASTIC ENERGY. There's really really good characterization here. It feels very clean and youthful, almost like an anime protag. My biggest thing is the pacing. Taking some time to let the lines breathe would take your acting to the next level. Normal people don't hurry along to get everything out of their mouths. There's lift and sway and hang time. Please don't be afraid to use that when you're reading. We're gonna wait for you, so take your time, breathe. Joe should feel like a conversation partner.
Gotcha! Sorry first time trying to go with VN fandubs so this was very informative! And in general something I will remember, THANK YOU!