HOLY MOLY!
You get some FANTASTIC emotion. You'd make a great anime actor! This is a bit of an odd situation because I don't really know what to tell you. The lines I gave you don't need that kind of explosive energy you gave to that second one. I was looking for a little more subtle anger in that scene, a slower build than the flashover you gave me. However, I am so glad you did, because it shows me you can do that. That would be super important in later cases where I would want that explosive power. You really gave me an audition that stood out!