Right off the bat, I'm noticing some mouth sound. These are things like spit and lip smacks, all those lovely asmr things. But in character voice, we really don't want them. They make it harder for me to edit your takes. I would recommend putting a little space between you and your mic, drinking LOTS of water (All the time but especially when you record), and listening back to your auditions. Even just a quick comb and some brief touch ups can really help a take. The other thing I'm noticing is that you sound a little tired. While this might work for other character types, it really doesn't work for Nao. She should feel more energetic - flustered or otherwise - and not really so nonchalant or monotone. I definitely think you have that in there, and I would love to take a listen if you'd want to resubmit, but there's no pressure. These are just a couple notes for you if you'd like to take them. :)
Ok I'll take those notes into suggestion! I'll cut off the smacks, chug gallons of water, and listen with more sound devices in the future. I lowkey was having issues downloading my audition before, so I was kinda relieved when I finally got it to work, so I guess I neglected to look further into the listening part. I'm usually always tired, so I'll try my best not to sound like that in my acting.
