So sorry, I forgot to add my experience and setup. I sadly just use my phone, though I'm looking into getting a mic. As for experience, I have been cast in multiple fandubs with an old server called Undead Dubs, and also am currently working in the project Your Turn To Abridge: Fandub By Majority.
I am obsessed with your voice! You clearly have a good instinct for acting! Your pitch is also very good for Sara. That being said, your background sound is a BIG note. You are a little limited by the phone mic you're using and I totally understand, but be mindful of little noises during your takes. When you shift in your chair or bump the table or whatever little things are happening, I can hear it in your takes. Being careful of these noises and proofreading your takes before finalizing would be a big help to you.
Thank you so much! I can definitely grab my better mic out when I get home (currently on vacation), so I can have a second take for you on the 25th or 26th, if that would work for you?