You've got a good voice, but it's a little too clear and kind for a character like Sou. What I'm looking for here is a little shiftier, a little younger, a little less bell-y and confident. The crazy things you tell an actor, huh? "Be more sketchy, be less confident." Never thought I'd tell someone that. But that's the energy we're looking for with Sou. He's the before picture, not the after. You've given me a fantastic well adjusted adult, but I'm looking for an insecure, edgy teen.