You're getting some fantastic emotion! I love the intensity you get on some of these lines and you seem to have really good understanding of dynamics. That being said, I'm getting a bit of issue with your audio as far as background sound and static. I would recommend doing some retouch in your recording software if at all possible and seeing how that freshens up your audio. All in all, very strong audition! I would love to see a retake if you would like to do one, but there's absolutely no pressure.
Of course!! I will work on fixing that as soon as I can and will be sending in a retake once I get a chance to!