Alice being British while Reko was Southern in our playthrough was so peak
Wow! You're getting really good emotion here!
Be careful of your background sound and your plosives. If I get a take with a harsh 'p' sound, there is no way for me to edit it out without ruining your voice, so please watch for these when you're recording. While your British accent is pretty good, I do like your natural voice better. The more comfortable you are with your accent, the easier it will be to play around with other components of your performance haha.
This is really solid! I would like to hear some more grit if you can get it. You should sound at least a few years older as Alice than you did as Joe. Alice isn't the same young, bubbly teen that Joe is. He should sound a little coarser.