This is very solid! Feel free to push and pull a little more with the expression. It does sound a little one note between the lines. It's a little, "This line is shrill and loud," and "Now, this one's quiet," instead of the more complicated emotion and sway that I'd like to see. That's not necessarily a bad thing, but I can tell you have the range to slow down and put more variation into a take if you experiment with the line a little more. I do really like the range. You're getting a good sound for that "scared little kid" we're looking for. Play around with it a little more and I think you'll have a fantastic performance to show for it.