Age : 18
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You show a good flexibility here. I'm very happy with the dichotomy between your first two lines. You're also getting a really good variation in volume, which is working well.
I think the third line still sounds a little stiff, but it could be because you're not familiar with the words. You can always take a minute to experiment to feel out different approaches and emphasis to figure out what sounds right and natural. There's nothing wrong with practicing an awkward line.
why did i just see this now