Age : 18
Haha, you get Director Shae treatment, too. Notes time!
I love that you're letting your voice jump in pitch, it feels more human. I am getting a little mouth noise, so be careful about that. I would recommend double checking your lines before you record and making sure you have the pronunciations correct.
Overall, very very solid. I love the grit and the rasp, it ages his voice well, and you get some really good expression here.
oh you gave me feedback on both my things got it