Super Mario Comicdubs: Nintendo Comics System
Ghen-dout for Tryclyde
Appears in Super Mario Bros. Shorts (Dear Princess Toadstool)
Voice Type: Moderate, Snake-like, Eager
Reference Clips: http://www.behindthevoiceactors.com/voice-compare/Super-Mario-Bros/Tryclyde/
Bio: Tryclyde is one of the bosses from Super Mario Bros 2 but in this production his 3 heads sent a letter to Princess Peach asking about their looks and trying to ask her out. While I would suggest doing different voices for each head as they all have a line each but I am not entirely sure whether if I am going to have cast 3 different VAs for each head or just cast one person for all 3 heads.
"1. (Head 1) We hope you won't think we're hogging all the advice, but
we have three questions. Number One: We know we're not the handsomest
guys in the world. Do you think cosmetic surgery might help?""2. (Head 2) Number Two: Although we're not very good-looking now, things may improve... so how about diner next Thursday?"
"3. (Head 3) Number Three: Last, if we take a princess to dinner and a
movie, are we expected to pay for popcorn, too? Sincerely, Tryclyde"
+ Well the tone of your delivery on the lines were pretty good but... - Voices are off, don't sound reptilian or dopey and they didn't sound varied either. So in other words this is decent but it could've been better.
thanks !, and thanks also for the comment, i just started trying VA on december, and yours is one of the auditions that i actually really want to VA in, thanks for the feedback, critique , and encouregement !