Hey, thank you for your audition. I was wondering if you would be willing to make another attempt but with some direction from me.
I would like to hear your Marianne with gratefulness and more positivity, subtle and/or obvious deliveries would work. She's still soft spoken, but this line should feel more like they're in the middle of a casual conversation.
Please do not delete this audition if you decide to do a redo, I would still like to consider it.