Deserted Skies - [A Minecraft Create: Aeronautics Film]
Corvus Silanchen for Amus [Supporting Role]
(male) Leader of the pirates, Amus Gray. Growing up during a terrifying war which led to the complete loss of his family and way of life. Because of this, he has both a strong distrust of people and government. In his adulthood, he would rob to survive, landing him between hard labor and prison.
Age: mid 30s
Gruff, commanding and very slightly gravelly voice.
Speaks slow and deliberately, uses alot of emphasis on words.
Rarely raises his voice, but it's sharp when he does.
Low-midrange tone
Ref: Gurney Halleck (Dune), Dutch Vanderline (RDR2)
- english
- male adult
[Angry] Goddammit! [Queiter]Do you know what you have just done? Now the entire town and their Grandma knows it's us!
[Shouting] Come on! Let's get out of here!
[Empathetic] I know you are all hurting. But it's nothing we haven't faced before. We just have to keep on pushing.
I love your tone and delivery on the louder parts, I wonder if you could apply that rough texture to the quiet parts too (The "Keep on pushing" line). Overall, really amazing!
Hello, thank you for the feedback, would you like me to redo the full submission or just the softer line?
Just the softer line alone is ok