MLP Burning Fury Shipfic
wingshy pure for Apple Jack
Apple Jack is not an original character for the Shipfic. she is one of the mane 6 from "My Little Pony : Friendship is Magic" For more details on her character and voice, do some research on the show and it's character.
“It's alright sugarcube. What were yer doing in my trees though? You weren't trying to nibble an apple or two were ya?”
She lets out a sigh. “Right...listen ere pardn'er. Whenever you want to say you like a mare, but you want to keep it secret, don't do it in my barn. It is my barn after all.”
“I pinkie promise to not tell any colt, mare or stallion until you have asked her out. Cross my heart, hope to fly and stick a cupcake in my eye.”
Great audition! You've got the accent down perfectly, but I'd say the voice still needs working on, it's like your doing just your regular voice, but with AJ's accent. you need to try and get her voice right. other than that though, Great! :D