Trinity Bridge: First Night Chapters 3 & 4
Nerdy Nom Nom for Smith
Smith is a Vampire and a member of the "Sacred Band" comprising the antagonists of this story. Vince is for the most part, stoic, cold and logical but his emotions can be drawn out if things start to get heated. He holds a begrudging respect for the Band's unofficial leader, Vincent, and a very outspoken annoyance toward his band mate Lilac.
[Calm and Rational] "Hold on, Vince. This may mean something… perhaps some sort of cryptic insight. She is a Quassus after all."[Pronounced "KWAH-SOOS"]
[Clod and Irate] "Then either go away or be silent. Some of us are content to have the easy job and we don’t need your senseless bitching every 2 minutes of the way. It just makes an otherwise easy task into a needlessly tedious ordeal."
[Seething but controlled anger] "That is enough from you, child! I will not dance to your psychotic tune! If you crave violence, though, I may be able to give you more than your fill!"
I like what you are doing, the voice sounds great, but try slowing his speech down a bit. Also for the 3rd line, I want more anger. Like ALL of the rage that you worked so hard to suppress is suddenly being brought to the surface all at once and you are only BARELY able to contain it... for now.
I get what you mean. I can put in a second audition right away. =)